Mahesh Waran:

Everything for me works except for the laugh at the beginning

Leonardo Rivera:

The audience should be able to tell whats happening in the scene even without the audio and I think thats the main issue with this shot. Theres no staging, no second character not even a photo.

Bee Kai En:

I think the rhythm and pose can be more better

Alex:

Great work on the movement, but I would have liked to see the other character in it as well