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Animator: Mario Galán

Description: Just a chill conversation between two friends

Experience: almost 4 years

Time taken: 2 weeks

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Thomas Darmon-Sanger:

The voices fit these characters so well!

Ben Zingo:

I'm confused, why is the character bobbing up and down?

Ahmed Morsy:

One of the best pieces so far! I just don't get why is she rocking back and forth as if she's riding a horse?
When pupils touch the rims of the eyes with a lot of white around it, it makes the character lose some appeal, if you have to take eyes to an extreme direction don't push the iris past the lids.
The bird's flight and landing was a bit distracting, and it needed quite a bit of work, the legs didn't move much on take off or landing, wing flaps speed were constant, I'd say ease it in and out a little bit, and give the wings a more interesting shapes, they look a bit flat now.
The last flap after the bird landed was a little unnecessary as well.
Her eye brows move a little too hard, if you wanna add subtle acting and sub expressions that's great, just make sure you don't make a whole new expression if you don't need to (Frame 72 for example)
Also watch out for expressions like frame 27, she looks a bit like a psycho, she's just having a playful argument with the bird, not planning to boil him alive.

Other than that great stuff! Your sense of weight is amazing, timing is spectacular, expressions are really appealing, I love the snappy lip-synch!

Mahesh Waran:

Is she walking ?

Paraskevi Koutalou:

Amazing expressions! Love those mouthshapes

Isaiah "Genus" Griggs:

The up and down bobbing is a bit much, but I like the lower framerate you have going on