Final Rating: 6.85. Finished 6 out of 52 entries.

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Animator: yewhongming

Description: A guy being arrest by police, because he harm his own nephew.

Experience: student

Time taken: 1 month


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Toby Leung:

Really nice acting but the lip sync seems off

kevin scott:

Nice concept. I think you could get this looking a lot better by tightening up the held poses. Right now it feels like he kind of drifts in and out of poses.

Cody Cessna:

More of a range of acting choices than a lot of the competition, yet it all fit well. We see a stronger progression into a different mood as his story changes.
Nice lighting.

Joshua Morley:

Great movement, flow! Really nice! The slam felt a bit odd, but likely just the lack of SFX threw me off.

Ben Zingo:

a lot of the motion in here feels really nice, but there's an underlying stiffness I'm trying to pinpoint. Part of it may be the IK controls in the hands, having some ambient movement in there will stop them from feeling too planted/artificial when so much of the rest of the body feels natural/realistic. Also make sure you're rotating the neck itself to help move the head (and prevent the neck from feeling stiff). Overall, really nice

J.K. Riki:

Not bad! It is a good start. A few thing that would help it is to remember without a noise to go with the big bang on the table, it pulls the viewer out of the piece. Also the last mouth open should stay open longer, to finish it out and complete the phrase. But overall a really solid entry, well done.