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by Sharu., December Competition Winner!
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i love the animation, and the life in the eyes of the characters. The lypsing and the dialogue are just shifted
Perhaps the single most beautiful entry this month. Very well animated, too. Top 5 entry in my opinion. :)
Aaron James Mongcopa:
winner!!! acting, concept and rendering. The mths is ahead of the sound though, need to adjust that a bit.
I really like this one. The staging and movements fit the characters and audio well. The lip sync is a bit off though.
Great shape and style. But the lip sync need another pass because is complete off. But great animation!!!
Nice style, nice work!!!
The animation is great but the audio seems to be a bit late :(
Beautiful style makes you feel like in a fairytale
But there's something off with the staging of the shot with the guy talking. I think it's because both characters are placed in the screen right side of the composition. I would definitely move him more screen left and maybe have the girl be partly visible in the framing too.
This has such great appeal and I really enjoy the arm movements. The lip sync is good for the most part but could use some improvement, especially by exaggerating the facial expressions more. Overall good work!
frame 60 to 65 lip sync is off
Wow, the scenery and everything is so well done!
Description: A small girl having conversation with an elf on a subway.
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