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ELF

by Sharu., December Competition Winner!

Final Rating: 7.35. Finished 1 out of 59 entries.

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Animator: Sharu.

Description: A small girl having conversation with an elf on a subway.

Experience: 5

Time taken: hr a day

Comments:

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Juliette Gales:


i love the animation, and the life in the eyes of the characters. The lypsing and the dialogue are just shifted

Richard Adams:

Perhaps the single most beautiful entry this month. Very well animated, too. Top 5 entry in my opinion. :)

Aaron James Mongcopa:

winner!!! acting, concept and rendering. The mths is ahead of the sound though, need to adjust that a bit.

Don:

nice!

Romantra:

I really like this one. The staging and movements fit the characters and audio well. The lip sync is a bit off though.

Leonardo Pereira:

Great shape and style. But the lip sync need another pass because is complete off. But great animation!!!

Jerry Lau:

Nice style, nice work!!!

Alice:

The animation is great but the audio seems to be a bit late :(

Anna Eivör:

Beautiful style makes you feel like in a fairytale

Elisabeth Janerka:

Nice animation!
But there's something off with the staging of the shot with the guy talking. I think it's because both characters are placed in the screen right side of the composition. I would definitely move him more screen left and maybe have the girl be partly visible in the framing too.

Katie Steuernagel:

This has such great appeal and I really enjoy the arm movements. The lip sync is good for the most part but could use some improvement, especially by exaggerating the facial expressions more. Overall good work!

Juan:

frame 60 to 65 lip sync is off

Zac Eriah:

Wow, the scenery and everything is so well done!