mowanie:

Thanks for your comments! :D

Richard Adams:

The animation here is terrific. The idea, not so much. The "human" so obviously isn't one. Lip syncing needs work, too. Very visually appealing though.

Jerry Lau:

Nice work, the rhythm is good. just a few things: in the second shot, the timing when the girls hand job down is too linear, maybe some ease- in will make it look better.

Also, when the girl says "oh", her body move up in arc and suddenly stop and return, I think it may look better if making a little circle arc instead of suddenly stop and return.

overall nice work.

Juan:

Add more In-Betweens and Slow in and outs. More Animation fundamentals needed