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Animator: canberk çetinkaya

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Andrei:

you need to work more on strong poses and try to emphasize on timing and spacing.

Prashant Makwana:

Needs a lot of improvement

Brian Rusnak:

Nice animation! I like the expressions.

I would work on adding some more rotation to the poses, particularly on the spine. Right now they characters stand fairly upright through most of the shot. Leaning them over a bit, or adding an arc to the spine would make them look more natural and "weighty".

Nice work! Keep going!