Prashant Makwana:

need a lot of improvement

James Harkonnen:

there's almost no acting in it.

Gull:

Good effort...very floaty...actions to me not mirroring the soundtrack.

Vedanth Panchoo:

Lip sync needs some work.

Jake Lee:

Nice animation! It would be good to see the animation speed up and pause on poses.

Brian Rusnak:

Nice work! I like the acting choice of the character using his mouth to hold the pipe-object. Nice touch.

He needs a bit more weight, right now he appears to float through the shot and across the frame. Try exaggerating the downward motion when he takes his steps, while adding some slight downward rotation to his chest, neck and head.

Nice job! Keep going!

Elisabeth Janerka:

Very slow timing, and the staging could be improved