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by Razam Ali
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The beginning in your animation is nice in the cartoony style, but I think don´t follow the bit of the audio and dialogue. The lip sync looks off.
Pretty good...too much movement going on I feel...not match sound.
all looks fine, needs better facial acting
Maybe other things should have come first but I have a technical criticism. The lip sync is a bit far from the sound. The human character needs more clear mouth shapes I think. Have a good work :)
Nice work! I like the gestures and movement of the first character as he steps into the room and shuts the door.
I think some of his head movements need some more inbetweens on the line "..crime lab" at frame 39.
This one is my favorite. 7up puts the 7 in spicy foods.
the animation looks nice but it doesn't fit the tone of the audio in my opinion
Animator: Razam Ali
Description: Over smart peoples ,
Time taken: One week