Final Rating: 4.84. Finished 49 out of 118 entries.

387 views including the voting period.


Animator: Shu Yang

Description: 2016 Dec audio animation

Experience: 2 years

Time taken: about 2 weeks


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Tari Mack:

The strongest part is the blue character's animation in the last shot. The orange character is a bit choppy overall and needs more exaggeration in his expressions. The last shot is the strongest animation for the orange character. The story telling here looks ambitious, so I suggest adding a couple moments of silence beforehand so the audience can absorb what they're looking at before the characters start talking.