Final Rating: 3.79. Finished 82 out of 118 entries.

370 views including the voting period.


Animator: Dustin Dashney

Description: Have not Touched Maya in a few years Just doing this as a refresher.

Experience: 4 years

Time taken: 8 hours


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Tari Mack:

The small movement of the male characters eyes (frames 51 - 60) is nice, but his sitting forward before that is too smooth/mechanical: there is not enough Slow In Slow Out. Frames 62- 121 are nice believable, and only need a bit more smoothness. (The mannerism reminds me of anime:).) Frames 216-225 the female character moves her head too quickly. In the final shot, the female character's animation in nice overall, but the male's animation is still a little stiff. (On a subjective note, I don't really believe that voice is coming out of a young female character.)


Your animation looks gud but need to wrk on in between more, lack of moving hold making it stiff

Cezar De Almeida Johansson:

The pronounciations on a lot to learn are a bit too even. They are good movement but they are as big movements which sells everything evenly, in a way where you want one word to be a bit bigger. Maybe go small movement, medium and then big.

Jasmine Keith:

Please back the camera up a bit...