Final Rating: 3.92. Finished 104 out of 177 entries.

479 views including the voting period.


Animator: Aaron Wilbanks

Description: What has happened to this girl to make her heart ache so?...

Experience: I have been studying 3D animation at Michigan State University for 2+ years

Time taken: This took me approximately 9 days to animate


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Rannva Macdonald Arnskov:

The poses are really good, and the camera positions are chosen to give an as good view as possible. The lipsyncing is believable, I really like how the entire face is working together to display the emotion.

Michael Launder:

good poses and lip synch! you really need to work on your camera staging, your cameras are breaking the 180 degree rule and its awkward for the viewers. also when you have a key pose like having her head on her knee, hold the whole body there for a moment. its important to have holds in animation and not have the whole body moving consistently!

David Alin:

why bother putting the leg up and down? Make up your mind, it's distracting

Dominic Rayner:

I have commented elsewhere that musical theatre animation acting is proving a hard one to pull off. A lot of floating through the animation it seems, with irrelevant actions. I don't want to be a harsh critic, but pose the character within it's limitations and act it through to see if these are motions and expressions that you would make when dreaming about a better world.

Bryan Stone: