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wow, if you had time to finish.. you must be a professional. great work
Love the animation at the beginning!
Nice work, I think the shot of the old woman was a bit static, but I like the idea of her going under the covers at the end!
which is starting part is superb! but suddenly which you are used character is unnecessary! if you continued with same character it will be awesome! but i like it the starting portion of animation! keep it up!
The beggining is nice
Paulo H. Scatena:
I'd love to see it if you had the chance to polish it all as it begins. Lovely animation!
First shot is spot on, the old maid shot might have been delivered better is some kind of overlay/flashback while the child is still singing. The end would have been better if we saw the child singing as she pulled the cover over her head.
The opening shot is the best part, it's a shame you didn't have time to make the rest to complete it ias an animation. The old woman is a time filler and although the animation of getting into bed is nice, it could do with showing the character's face and lips more. Well done however.
Animator: Marten Visser
Description: This sad girl is not allowed to cry.
Experience: 2 years
Time taken: On and off the last two weeks