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Street Urchin with Fort

by Cory Dornbusch

Final Rating: 3.67. Finished 124 out of 177 entries.

436 views including the voting period.


Animator: Cory Dornbusch

Description: First entry in 11 sec club. Was fun but ran out of time due to the holidays. Oh well.

Experience: 10 years

Time taken: 24 Hours


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Eddie Mendez:

lip sync is a little off, and the sitting down part doesnt really look like hes sitting down, possibly due to the camera angle

Michael Launder:

be careful where some things feel jittery, the movement becomes studdered and interupted making it awkward for the audience. also really concentrate on the body before you move to the mouth controls.

Paulo H. Scatena:

Solid animation, I wish the background was not so dark so it could read better. For future improvements, tongue animation would make quite a difference. I personally felt the second cut to be a little disruptive, I'd keep exploring to find a more fluid transition.

David Alin:

nice intentions, keep practicing. Never let your poses be symmetrical

Bryan Stone:

Hold and cleanup needed.