Final Rating: 5.33. Finished 35 out of 173 entries.

442 views including the voting period.


Animator: Adam Sirrelle

Description: Nervous smoking and concern.

Experience: >4 years

Time taken: 2 weeks


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David Hendrix Shovlin:

Real solid. Hadn't even thought about a cigar.

Richard Carrillo:

Too much cigar.

Enrico Westley:

There's not that much happening as far as the phrasing of the shot is concerned. You should apply more than the cigarette actions to this piece.

Brooke Wagstaff:

I love that you're working with the sound file with the drags on the cigarette, but maybe cut out a few of them? Right now, that's a *lot* of cigarette smoke inhalation in a short amount of time. :)

Jerry Graham:

Really good - the timing of the lip sync at the start of "Saul, tell him" is a bit off though - like the S sound starts while the cigarette is still in the character's mouth.

J.K. Riki:

The cigar works really nicely with the heavy breathing, good concept there! It would be nice if you had added a few feminine touches to the model, even if it was just pink eyebrows or something to say a bit more "female." Keep at it, and good luck with future entries!