Final Rating: 4.01. Finished 80 out of 173 entries.

301 views including the voting period.


Animator: Christopher Bryan Wall

Description: I would like as much feed back as possible.

Thank you.

Experience: none

Time taken: 2 weeks


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Richard Carrillo:

Why is it that every entry that uses this rig has a really soft character and all the movements seem weak for the voice tone? Really I'm seeing the same issues in every entry that uses this rig o.o

Deven Ramesh Bhosale:


but character is looking more sleepy...

Juan Carlos A C:

Animation needs to be stronger. She must be desperate

Enrico Westley:

It's getting there! I feel as though you need a couple more story-telling poses, and a few anticipation poses to really bring it to life!

Benjamin Berg:

Some of the poses look nice however a lot of your animation feels floaty and could use some slight snap in parts. Also, your eyebrows and eyes need a lot of work.

My advise to you would be to take video reference and analyse the face. Tracking parts of the face in your reference can help you a lot.