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Sad evening with the Devil

by Melanie Matorcevic

Final Rating: 5.50. Finished 17 out of 51 entries.

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Animator: Melanie Matorcevic

Description: Ranting to a friend.
Any CC would be appreciated!

Experience: Recent Student Graduate

Time taken: 3 Weeks


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Jonathan Fontaine:

The all begining is really good, maybe you could have skipped pose 262 and 270.. it adds a stops in her big movement.. and it messes with both readabiliy, balance and clarity of her making a big point.. going from resting on bar straight to punching it with strenght (and good anticipation would make it stronger) good job though !

Gaucelm De Villaret:

It's ok, but still not a fan of just showing one person for a two-person dialogue. Movements don't feel too natural either.

Kyra Simone:

Nice work on that face! Focus on posing the body with that same subtlety and deliberation. She is drunk, but there is an unnatural wobble around 258 and 402 of the arm. This is really just meticulous attention to detail at this point.

Parsa Peyvasteh:

nice facial --- lack of body mechanics