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by Vamsi Krishna

Final Rating: 2.97. Finished 48 out of 54 entries.

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Animator: Vamsi Krishna

Description: I am an animation student and i choose 3d character animation as my specialization.So i will participate in every month 11 seconds club competition.And i'll be looking for the audience comments and guidelines.

Experience: I am a student of animation

Time taken: 15 days

Comments:

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John M:

Nice try but far too floaty

Sabrina:

Way too much going on here... too distracting and the characters don't look connected. Don't rush through things

shawn:

The character(s) are all over the place. Lock down your keys after your down telling your story telling poses so when you go to spline the model they want move so much.

steven:

The characters move too much without purpose

Elisabeth Janerka:

Very floaty animation. It's okay to keep the characters still, because this was just distracting to look at

yovicein:

too much movement

Abhishek tiwari:

Why are the characters moving so much ?

Lea:

Sorry to say but your characters look drunk. Very, very unnatural amounts of movement going on here, maybe start shooting some reference and getting better story keys in place before moving on to full animation.