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It's for your futur

by Yohann

Final Rating: 5.02. Finished 21 out of 54 entries.

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Animator: Yohann

Description: A mother try to convice her daugther

Experience: Junior

Time taken: 2 Days

Comments:

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John M:

Nice

Craig Martin:

Its a nice scene you created. It carries the narrative well and I like that iconic being trapped in a car with our parents scenario. There were some nice readable poses but some more body acting would have made it more appealing for me.

Heba Saleh:

I feel like this was pretty strong up until 140, where nothing seems to really move/express aside from Abigail's lip-sync. Then, the strong acting suddenly comes back at 308. Even if Abigail is giving this lazy answer and resting her head, there should still be more going on with her and her mom. Because they both have feelings and thoughts about the situation.

Sabrina:

The daughter looks to blank in her expressions. have her do more gestures. It's like she's tired and doesn't say what she means.

steven:

Liked how they both turned there heads at the end

Yumeng Mortensen:

Overall you did a good job! I like the idea of this talk happened while driving, which looks really natural. Also I like the facial of two characters, each of them have their attitudes there. I think it would be nice to have some hands movement for the left girl though.