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Life is a holistic equation

by jem

Final Rating: 4.78. Finished 25 out of 54 entries.

2,580 views including the voting period.

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Animator: jem

Description: A hard-hitting dragon slayer is trying to defend her passion in life, which is more important than monetary compensation or career advancement...

Experience: 1 year

Time taken: 40 hours

Comments:

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James Choi:

Could use some work on smoothing it out, the hands freeze in mid air instead of smoothly offsetting a bit.

Yumeng Mortensen:

I felt the camera is little bit weird for me. Maybe in the beginning she doesn't have to face the camera (maybe not the first person's perspective). I like the kid's acting choice, it's more natural than the mom. Maybe mom's chest a bit over twisted when she said "or me". Nice setting though, good job!

steven:

The first woman is too pose to pose but love the acting in Abigail