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Rejecting Mother`s Bread

by akashsingh

Final Rating: 3.03. Finished 47 out of 53 entries.

10,518 views including the voting period.


Animator: akashsingh

Description: I am 3d animation student working on 3d character animation i will be participate every month i looking for your valuable feedback

Experience: I am a student.

Time taken: fifteen days


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

James Choi:

very floating and unnatural, shooting reference footage can help a lot


Need to have the blond woman’s eyes not moving that much. Keep on practicing though

Yumeng Mortensen:

Be careful with the knife around frame 80-86, it looks like her cut herself. I more like the acting of people on the right, she has her attitude there which is nice. Just double check her pupils, sometimes they're floating around not focusing on a spot.