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Lip sych should be worked
Good job in posing and rithm. Facial expressions need improvement. They are lack of ideas, feelings.
Movements are natural, but lack the conveyance of mass or momentum. Nice work, otherwise.
Lost it at the end, not sure if you ran out of time but its missing the lipsync at the end, and he's not remotely looking where he's pointing. The beginning is great though
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