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The Cyclops and The Cynic

by Alinta Kirkpatrick

Final Rating: 1.90. Finished 98 out of 100 entries.

618 views including the voting period.


Animator: Alinta Kirkpatrick

Description: A cyclops discusses chickens with a man.

The male rig is Tuna Rig retrieved from Behance, and the female rig is the elevens rig.

Neither are made by me.

Experience: I'm an art student.

Time taken: A couple of hours.


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Paul Von:

This needs attention to timing for the actions and the lips moving. Careful of the sudden moves and 'pops'. What is the story these characters are in when this happened?

Sabrina Winkel:

Something wrong with his eye?!! This was boring!

William Harrison:

You seem to move the mouth when the people are talking, but the only reason your mouth opens is because of the jaw. You should work more on your animation principles and also take video of yourself and really study how you move.