Final Rating: 6.39. Finished 14 out of 100 entries.

987 views including the voting period.


Animator: Dave Cleland

Description: Started this one a bit late but happy with how it turned out, wish I'd had time to animate her hair too.

Experience: 10 years in industry, 6 years as animator

Time taken: about 10 days on and off


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Shark Bait:

You should work on directing the viewer's attention, e.g. when a character is talking and supposed to be the main focus, try not to have other characters move too much because it can be distracting. Of course it depends on the scene, but in this case for example, when the girl starts talking, the guy makes some big movements which draws your eye to him.

Santiago Colombo:

Good. I think his animation is great, but she is overacting or her stances are weird

Chris Rodriguez:

really nice. one major gripe is the lip sync. it's a bit off on the whole thing.


Nice animation and idea, I prefer Malcolm animation Mathilda move too much for me when she said the last sentence. But very nice animation good job !

Richard Carrillo Barrios:

I think this is the idea that matches the most with the audio. Good thinking.

Sumedh Dharmadhikari:

Great holds, arcs and facial expressions.

Sabrina Winkel:

Whoa! The judge really looked like she was bored out of her mind!