Final Rating: 3.53. Finished 70 out of 100 entries.

364 views including the voting period.


Animator: Sergey Loza

Description: I would love your critic.

Experience: Less than a year

Time taken: 15 days


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Justin H:

The hand movements are good but the facial stuff and center masses of the characters seems quite stiff

Yev Rotar:

Your characters are too stiff. Loosen them up u bit. Show the difference between relaxed and tensed.

Matt B.:

I feel your poses need to be a bit stronger, with slightly more exaggerated in-betweens. Everything feels subdued to the point where the motions are uninteresting.

One thing that is very nice, however, is the bounce you've given to the male's hands as he brings them down on each point. It looks very natural.

Kenneth Rondon:

More facial expressions!

Sabrina Winkel:

No story, bad character movements, bad lip sync. Only positive was the camera