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Twilight's Tirade

by Maciej

Final Rating: 3.39. Finished 101 out of 138 entries.

385 views including the voting period.


Animator: Maciej

Description: When mentor is sick of his protege

Experience: Almost none

Time taken: 3-5 hours, with a lot of gaps


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Eric Raffle:

animation looks alright but you needed to show the mouth more


The movements are too jerky and understated. The lipsynch needs polish. I think the biggest problem is that ponies can't emote as expressively as humans can.

Dalton Krajewski:

The blue pony's animation is quite well done, but the purple/pink one seems very stiff and rigid throughout. Some more body movement and more exaggerated/asymmetrical lip-syncing would greatly improve the entire animation (although the mouth movements could just be a fault of the rig--I can't say for sure).

Harishankar Thiyagarajan:


Andrew Wilson:

votted 10 becoz ponnies