Final Rating: 4.06. Finished 64 out of 138 entries.

366 views including the voting period.


Animator: Tristan

Description: Hi guys this is my first 11 second club entry, I hope you like it.

Experience: Student

Time taken: 2 weeks


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Steven GUardado:

You might want to play with your composition. The hand off of the paper moves too quick, should be slower.

Nathan Younger:

perfect animation, be careful of the paper sliding on table

Pauline Champetier:

Nice poses. You could improve the animation by delaying some actions, you don't have to hit one pose and stop everything at the same time. Delaying one arm for example, creating overlapping actions, would make your scene more believable.


Pretty darn good, the only issues are that the man seems to freeze in between movements and the woman doesn't have much to do and her movements aren't as polished as the man's.