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Emotional Handicap

by Kyle

Final Rating: 2.52. Finished 125 out of 138 entries.

340 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Kyle

Description: a father address his daughters addiction

Experience: Student

Time taken: 2 weeks

Comments:

(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Nathan Younger:

great camera movements

Dalton Krajewski:

I liked the timing of the movements quite a bit! The main issue I see is that the poses could use some exaggeration. The male character's spine stays fixed and rigid the entire time, so bending his back a bit would make his poses a lot more expressive. In the first half of the video, also, the woman's pose seems unnatural--almost like she's been folded in half--so dialing that back a bit and conveying the slouching posture using the back curve would help immensely.

behrouz:

what about man's fingers? let them move a little