Final Rating: 3.63. Finished 127 out of 162 entries.

36 views including the voting period.


Animator: XuDong

Description: hope u like it

Experience: student

Time taken: 2weeks


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Per Cardell:

Good. You put something together. This is just the beginning of your animation journey. Keep'em coming!

Ryan D Lowe:

Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.

I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.

However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.

"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy

There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!

Aaron Clement:

A bit linear and back and forth. Nice staging. Love the moody lighting.

Stas Bolotine:


Too floatyyyyy


You have to hold in your poses Strongly.The is poses you

did is Good but its not at all registering in eyes.Any way good


Dean Mosier:

There's too much movement going on and his actions don't seem normal.

Babul Prasad:

too much unnecessary movements