Vanessa Gonzalez:

It felt a little unfinished, and the lip sync was a bit off with the timing. If you plan on finishing it, one thing I'd suggest would be to move the green guy's left hand from it's final position, I'm not entirely sure what you were going for. And also give him a little more emotion, it would seem like he has the same face throughout the animation.

Ryan D Lowe:

Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.

I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.

However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.

"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy

There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!

Aaron Clement:

I like the ending. A bit floaty overall.

Jez:

slow motion ...ha ha

Sai Srikanth Charepalli:

You rendered it well. But your is not up to the mark. You need to focus on timing & spacing. Practice on that.

Amartya Mukherji:

Lacks fundamentals

Richard Clark:

Way too floaty...work on your timing.