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When wife's on holiday

by Sgrasa

Final Rating: 5.62. Finished 32 out of 162 entries.

203 views including the voting period.


Animator: Sgrasa

Description: Wife's calls home to know how her son's doing...

Experience: 2 years

Time taken: 1 week


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Per Cardell:

Apart from the ik-hand resting on the furniture and the unneed extra duration at the end - I like this. The animation is pretty good and I recognize the unpleasant situation he is in. Good work.

Yue Yuan:

Good Job ,and I want your model.... haha~~please!please!please!


Like it an idea & animation, however; what's up with a kid ? I've got the message ... a phone call again, I'm placing myself on "do not call list" ...lol

Aaron Clement:

Didn't get the ending. Good lead up, tho.


expresison are nice



Amartya Mukherji:

nice concept and animation..

Vanessa Gonzalez:

I really like the his expressions! And the lip sync is one of the best I've seen out of like the 100 I went through.

Richard Clark:

Great body movement on the guy. Make sure you address the arm pops around 118-140. Try and work on the elbow not popping in and out of the movement. Frame 235; the movement hits a wall. I would try something else with the movement of the kid. That "jump turn" movement is not very interesting. Again, the guy's body movement hits a wall at 353

Ryan D Lowe:

This is over exaggerated but I love it! Love the flow/arcs this goes through. Good stuff!

J.K. Riki:

The final cut was a bit jarring, but otherwise I like the concept! It may have gone on a little too long at the end, you didn't need all that extra stuff to get the story across.

Casey Colledge:

I really like this one. Especially the first part. I am not really in love with the last two facial expressions. I would rather have seen a more frustrated look followed by a deep breath and close his eyes and shake his head. (or something along those lines) Right now it just doesn't seem to fit situation. Unless, I am misunderstanding the story. Great job though!

Danny Kneip:

Nice bit of lip syncing and character animating!