Final Rating: 5.04. Finished 54 out of 162 entries.

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Animator: Hugo Composti

Description: A guy with a gun tells someone to not be looking for trouble with him because he could regret it.

Experience: More or less a year

Time taken: 10 days

Comments:

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S.D.G:

use some hand movement

James Van Dam:

Could use a bit more secondary action. Like in the fingers or the one foot. Heck one the "your better off not knowing" part he could brandish the gun a bit. I honestly didn't see the gun on the first play though.

Aaron Clement:

Nice pose and staging. Maybe more of a moving hold at the start. Lipsync is a bit off at the end... qudos for not overdoing this.

Caleb Rankin:

I really like your animation of the upper body and face! Not moving the legs at all is a little distracting. I'd move them ever so slightly to keep them from looking like they are frozen .

Richard Clark:

I like it but I would have like to see more body movement in your piece. Right now he stays in the same major pose throughout.

Ryan D Lowe:

This is good work. I really wanted to see a pose with the gun/body. A quick "point out" moment on the inflection of the piece. overall too static. Lip sync is nice. Just needs another pass. And the jaw control needs scaled back quite a bit. Too wide on a lot of shapes. Good work!

Amartya Mukherji:

nice.. fine tune the lip sync

Danny Kneip:

Nothing subtle about the lip sync here! Every syllable is an open mouth.. I think it's over-animated, and the hands and fingers under-animated (fingers on the left hand never move!)