Final Rating: 5.45. Finished 37 out of 162 entries.

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Animator: Yue Yuan

Description: A killman visit a prisoner him friend.

Experience: 5 years

Time taken: 3days

Comments:

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S.D.G:

nice....for frames 108... it might be good to drag head downwards with a blink, then overshoot and settle

Liviu Boar:

I liked it, it seemed just a lil bit over-acted, and the lip sync could've been better

Vanessa Gonzalez:

Pretty good animation, I'd work on the lip sync a bit more, though.

Ryan D Lowe:

Texture is good, but the motion is incredibly mushy. Not sure if that was the intention but arcs/limbs are breaking throughout the follow through. Lip sync needs another good pass.

Aaron Clement:

Nice ending.

Amartya Mukherji:

wow.. that has got some punch in it... Superb animation. how well you have synced each and every dialogue hits with your acting and smooth curves is a treat to watch.
Only complain might be, - energy and pace of your animation sometimes exceeds the audio pace. But that gets overshadowed buy the superb acting.

Danny Kneip:

He says "You're better off not knowing" and then gives him a picture to look at. I'm lost on the concept, and I completely missed the "sliding of the envelope" across the table upon first viewing. I love the expression at F176, but the B in "better" is completely lost on the lean in, and F198 is a strange "F" sound. The sync, overall, needs quite a bit of polishing, and some of the gestures and movements seem extremely forced and rushed - (his left hand goes from his chin to the table top in only 4 frames). There's much to like here, but it's a bit of an untamed animation at the moment.

Bedango Ghosh:

nice.