Per Cardell:

I would change the camera angle on this one and focus on less and more specific hand gestures. I still enjoy to look at this. Keep it up!

Aaron Clement:

Poses feel a little weak. Last pose is great, though. Needs more texture to the timing... just needs more snap and punch in places.

Muhammad Arsal:

looks good but when the dialogue start i find a little timing problem... looks slow.. good effort though :) keep up the good work

Richard Clark:

Nice work! Though, I feel he gestures too much with his right hand. I would minimize that a bit.