First Ever Animation try & entry
by Collin Black
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You have begun your carrier as an animator. Work hard and have fun. A couple of years from now you will be able to look back on this piece and smile!
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Everything moved linearly; very slow and robotic. The words synced pretty well though.
I think it's decent, not because there's anything really wrong with it, but only because it feels "floaty" and unfinished.
Ryan D Lowe:
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.
I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.
However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.
"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy
There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!
lip syncing is good but animation needs a lot of improvement.
Too floaty. Try more moving holds.
Need to work on timing and better poses.
Seems like he's underwater, moving in slow motion.
Animator: Collin Black
Description: This was my first crack at animating in 3ds max, well a human with lip sync and stuff
Time taken: 6 days