by Ferit Yucel
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Do him less rubbery and bouncy and you will climb the ratings soon enough. Keep working!
James Van Dam:
I like the effort put into the animation. However, his performance doesn't match the clip though.
Wobblin all OVER the place!
Why does he bob about so much? Nice staging and idea.
I like how your animation is smooth, but the action is a little excessive. I think toning down how much the characters moves would really help the sequence.
I think it's not bad except he's bouncing throughout the whole animation too much and that is distracting. If you lessen the amount of bounces, or anticipations, and maybe hold his pose a bit longer around frame 100 then I think it would be a stronger animation.
Ryan D Lowe:
There is a TON of anticipation here, and the character looks too rubbery! Tone that down a bit!
nice animation but do you think the pace of your animation syncs properly with the audio?
there r too much movements
I think you suffer from bounciness...your character constantly bounces with his motion practically the entire time. I've never seen anyone pickup and kids face like that with just two fingers. And that last gesture...eh..would you do that yourself when talking to someone?
Very bouncy! Too bouncy?
It's got nice movement, but it might be a little overkill as it is. He's SO bouncy that I felt like I was getting a little dizzy trying to follow his eyes and face. Might just need toned down a little bit, but the concept is nicely done! Good job overall. Like the staging too.
His head bobbing and bouncing is very distracting. Take that out or tone it way down and I think this would be a stronger piece.
too much movement . you overdid it .
Animator: Ferit Yucel
Description: My son sleeping like a dog :)
Experience: one year
Time taken: one week