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Final Rating: 4.74. Finished 67 out of 162 entries.

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Description: This is my job for August competition, I hope you like it. waiting for your comments and critics. Thank you :)

Experience: 5 years

Time taken: 3 days


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Per Cardell:

What a smart ass! I like the style of animation but I don't understand the idea. It has qualities but could be further polished.

Ryan D Lowe:

Great animation here, but the story is all over the place. Is he upset? He shakes his head around F165...

Aaron Clement:

Needs more polish. Love the creativity, though.

Amartya Mukherji:

good. but you can polish it further.

Danny Kneip:

I really wish he had walked in with that trigger - we wouldn't have known what it was or what was going to happen, but at least it wouldn't have come out of the thin blue sky, as it appears to do here. The concept is good, as is the lip sync. I think the movement on "lie" is over-animated, but the rest is good. The guy walking in has a nice strut, though he does appear to slide into his final resting place and the sway from one side to the other before the dialogue is well done, but also over done, in my opinion. The costumed character falling is well done.

Thomas Edward:

Great idea, and nice smooth believable motion! The Lucha Libre guy's fall at the end is slightly off as the chair falls away, but has nice comic timing as he follows it.