Final Rating: 4.63. Finished 77 out of 162 entries.

51 views including the voting period.


Animator: Jordan Davies

Description: about a week and a half work. consider it a detailed blockout

Experience: 4yrs

Time taken: 1.5 week


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I really like the acting choices for the man! For the woman, I would love to see her sit down more gently and then the man still gets startled out of his sleep. The way she jumps onto the couch, it seems like she's trying to annoy the man, but then her subsequent actions and expression don't support that idea. I also think the camera moves are distracting. But with a few tweaks, this could be really great!


Ha ha... you almost took it literally...actually I like it

Aaron Clement:

Good acting.


great idea... like the acting, just wish you would finish it


good gestures and amazing lip sync.

Amartya Mukherji:

Nice , but not up to the mark. I felt acting could have been a bit more matured.

Vanessa Gonzalez:

Great animation. I like when he adjusts himself and the lip sync. My only critique though is to maybe move the camera angle a bit to the left so we can see him talking better ,and because the angle might be a bit weird with his legs open and all.

Richard Clark:

From 120, the posing looks fine with both characters but then you keep the male character in the same pose which starts to look awkward and the girl continues to remain stiff. I would explore some transitioning poses here to change things up.

Danny Kneip:

The lip sync is fairly solid and the concept is good. The camera movement is very distracting, and the shot cut at F231 is strange - the angle is almost right, but a different focal length would have been more appropriate. Otherwise, a good entry.


Now this is good!