Comments:
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Joshua:
Body movements are good, though I would have liked to see more direct interactions between the characters as this audio is very heart to heart and deep, and the two characters feel very disconnected from one another given the distance, and one character never even looks at the other, almost like they're in the middle of a fight rather than a kid who's worried about her father's happiness.
Jonathan White:
Superb animation. Every detail was attended too, even the hair and earrings.
Mary Shaw:
Not bad! But I'll be honest and say the voice doesn't fit with the female character.
John Alston:
Animation is good- but the character model doesn't seem accurate to the child's voice.
Arjun anilkumar:
Nice!
Animator: Raghavendra V
Description: This guy has lost him job, and his daughter wants to help him.
Here is the link for initial storyboard
https://www.11secondclub.com/forum/viewtopic.php?id=36029
Experience: 15+
Time taken: 15 days