Seth:

very good artstyle

Joshua:

I would love to have seen this in a more finished form.

John Alston:

I think there's a point to passing animatics off as animation, but I think that part of doing an animation contest is seeing animators provide a sense of life to their polygons or sketches - it'd almost be like having stills as a short film - I don't think this goes well for films that aren't La Jetée.