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Ian Grove:
I love this! The actions, expressions, and designs all feel very cohesive even in a rough state, and the camera cuts are good for highlighting the emotions of the two characters when each is important.
One thing I might try would be to make his arm gestures on "why are you so concerned" a few frames earlier-- to me that feels like it might match the beats of his speech a little bit better.
Great work though! It really sells the emotions nicely.
John Alston:
I think this might be the "best of the unfinished films" - drama comes through, but I also don't think this should take top spot.
Animator: Kaan Erkılıç
Description: Lately, I’ve been focused on making animatics, so I could only deliver a rough version for this month’s project ,I couldn’t spend as much time on it as I wanted.
Experience: 1
Time taken: 4 Hour