Ezra Allen:

Bit drifty between frames. Try and tighten up your tweens. Don't let the eyes drift between boz eyed and wall eyed

Mary Shaw:

I really like this a lot! I like the story telling in it. It's so cute! :D

John Alston:

I think the animation is fine.

But I also think the laying is an excuse to not animate the daughter's hand movements, and I also think that this sort of position seems too skeevy, but I don't think that's the animator's intent.

Jenna Liesman:

Solid stuff! There's moments in the girl's last line where her body movement is so buttery smooth that she's a little less believable.