Comments:
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John Alston:
I think the dialog being altered (louder, and with more spaces) makes it seems worse than it is, but it is a bit underdone.
Jenna Liesman:
I'd like to see the girl's expressions pushed further! I can tell what the dad's expressions are, very effective work there, but hers get a little lost.
Animator: Jesseth
Description: Para mi clase de animación avanzada.
Experience: Soy estudiante.
Time taken: Una tarde.