Comments:
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Biola Animation:
Nice character design, nice layout, nice posing. The first edit is off—does not catch the character at the same point in his downward action on Shot 2. So that creates a little bump out of the action—but the rest of the edits work very well.
John Alston:
"Film school good" which isn't the end of the world, but it does seem like there was a case of playing to one's strength's as opposed to challenging them.
Animator: Ollie Ivey
Description: A kitten wants to help advertise for the family fish business.
Experience: Four years
Time taken: One week