Anthony:

The lip sync at the beginning is really off - it gets better with "eight schools". The child is animated rather well, and lip synced well, too. The camera moves appear well placed to me as well.

Tiffany Lounsbury:

Fluid, natural movements. Nice job.

Michael D. Smith:

Hard to feel any emotion from the characters. They feel like puppets rather than living things. Attention to little details and timing and adding fluid subtle motions can improve that.