Final Rating: 4.97. Finished 67 out of 169 entries.

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Animator: Xieyushani

Description: We can help each other and don't always let me do the whole thing myself ok?

Experience: A college student studying animation for three years

Time taken: 2 weeks


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Ben Zingo:

there's some nice things here, but your characters feel very wobbly, and there's just too many actions. You don't need them to gesture for every line of dialogue! I think you could benefit a lot from shooting reference footage of yourself acting out the scene, and limit yourself to whatever actions feel natural. Sometimes less is more!

Michael D. Smith:

Some good bits, but I think the "bobblely" motion of the characters was very distracting. Rather than flowing from one thing to the next it felt too much like do action A and then action B. Smoothing transitioning "through" all the actions would help a lot.

Jesus Porcel:

Try to avoid so much movement in the characters


Limb movements seem to be too exaggerated and make the scene very restless

Tom S:

Not sure what the story is, why the one character is idling by the shelves versus entering the room..while the other character was in the kitchen.

Martin Miljkovic:

Too much movement on character standing. Less is more.