Good luck with that
by Auszy, April Competition Winner!
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So nice! I really enjoy the bounce in her walk! Great work!
Brittany H. Simpson:
Great movement throughout.
Michael Angelo Carlucci:
the performances in this animation are amazing!
Aaron James Mongcopa:
Winner! Jeez, you saved my voting time. Nice job! good acting and concepts. The "putting of the backpack animation" is awesome.
Your animation overall is good. I like the expression of the girl at the start when she was surprise, but after that i feel the expressions of the character are not expressive enough. The mouvement by moment with the spy more than the girl was a bit jerky. Of course a little bit of color will be better, but overall i see your animate with a great eye . Continue your great work!
Good lipsync and beautiful fluidity in your animation makes it super pleasant to watch!
This is awesome!
Man, this one is amazing: two characters who both look and move different from each other, I'm just amazed by the draftsmanship and great execution of these 3 shots. great follow through on the hair, collar and tie. Though, the man's head could had a few more frames as it looked a little jarring.
Dude this is so smooth!!
I really like the first shot where the kid puts her backpack on, and I think the walking is animated very nicely. I do feel like it is lacking some gestures though beyond frame 80 though. It seems odd that the kid doesn't take her hands off the backpack straps the whole rest of of the animation, and the two characters turn their heads towards each other but never their torsos or anything else. It's a really great start but I think adding a little more would make it feel more organic.
so smooth !!
Anthony Abou Rezk:
This one is so smooth! I love the man's walk cycle with the attitude, with more time this would have been amazing!
Description: Tried doing some walking and talking...twas rough
Experience: Barely any
Time taken: 2 weeks