Simon Côté:

it needs more fps but i see the potencial ;)

Foxy:

It's really hard to understand what exactly is going on in this shot. The camera is kind of all over the place and the trash can doesn't make sense at the end. Where did the trash can come from? How/when did the character get inside?

eddyiv:

It would've been helpful to have more frames to make it less chopey

Éloise Valiquette:

Your animation lacks fluidity of movement, it would be necessary to make more frames to make the movements smooth.

Zachary Lussier:

The character are not active enough and the facials can be better. So improve the mouvement and the facials will make your animation even better.

Anthony Abou Rezk:

Good job, I feel like this is the type of animation you see on youtube, like the oddonesout where they tell a life story and animate it.