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A young girl's hunch

by Edison

Final Rating: 5.13. Finished 57 out of 195 entries.

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Animator: Edison

Description: A young girl gets a hunch when she accidently meets her idol

Experience: 1 year

Time taken: about a week


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Mihir bari:

What an quality

Éloise Valiquette:

Your movements lack a little fluidity, but on the other hand I really like your stage lighting!


The body movement seems kinda unnatural at the last part, but overall its pretty nice!


In the first shot, his body and head move at the same time. It would be better to see his body move first then his head follows through since his attention is behind him.

The camera cut at frame 50 is really jarring. The character has completely changed her pose so it doesn't feel like a continuation of the moment. I'd recommend working on your phonemes as well.

Simon Côté:

the movements are pretty slow but great quality ;)

Zachary Lussier:

I like the visual, but i think the animation can be improve mostly on the facials.

Anthony Abou Rezk:

Nice! I like the lighting, but the camera angles are a little distracting in the beginning, when they move from place to place. The animation, could be more polished, but it's not bad, so good job!