(Commenting only available during the rating period)
Lots of personality to find here. Very natural, subtle character movement. Only thing motion wise I think could be improved is a little more variation in facial expression. Well done.
I really like the shaking hand on the walking stick. Nice touch! Some actions, especially the hand on the shoulder feel a bit weightless. Otherwise great job!
I really like the trembling arm on the old man :D
This is getting there. You should work more on overlapping action. For example, the punch seems to just drive its self. Try to put the body into that motion. Take some reference and study it.
Some good acting. The old man's constant wiggle of the cane was a little distracting.
Description: An old man giving advice to a young man
Time taken: 3 weeks on and off