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Choppy movements. No facial animation or lip sync.
This is still in blocking. Guess you ran out of time. A good 1st pass!
Work on your composition and framing. There is also a weird empty space on the screen right while the characters are cramped up in the left upper side of the screen
Description: just one week sorry I dont know how to rnder, sorry its just blocking
Time taken: 1 week